Shaun comes back with a few changes to his Down the Angel story, and three possible new titles, which we narrow down to one. And he says he wasn't nudging me at all, that he's not that subtle. I like the way his story is all dialogue, like a little radio play for two actors. Must ask him if he has someone who wants to read it with him. It's going to be a rush trying to fix readings as well as get the book printed, but a good kind of rush, I hope.